I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

To my girl Ninna.

I'm glad that we got to meet.

You seem clean and neat.

Ninna I love you for who you are.

I just wish you didn't live so far.

Ninna I got to tell you that you rock.

I'm sure you have on your sexy socks.

You seriously are a true girl who cares.

You have such beautiful dark hair.

I'm so glad that a gal like you makes me smile.

Your the one girl that any guy would want to be with for awhile.

You have such a cute laugh it makes my day.

Your the one who knows it anyways.

I like to put my arms around you and whisper in your ear.

That your so beautiful as I want you to hear.

Even through the tough times there might be a tear.

But nothing talking to you ever in my life again is a fear.

Because I will always care.

Btw everyone the sexy sock thing is a inside joke between Ninna and me. ; ). Ninna it was so much fun writing you a poem. You are worth my time anyday of the week, month or year.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

that was just so beautiful i thank GOD for putting you in my life you are so special to me. i used to think that there were no guys out there that really knew how to respect and treat a lady but i am so happy that we have come a crossed each others path and i am so honored that you wrote me a beautiful poem and cant wait to be in your arms.

luv you ninna.=)

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

juvenile

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

omg, thats so so so sweet!!!!

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

she'll love it.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

It's very cute. It rhymes. :)

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

i think its ok

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

kinda homo

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

awww

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

Adorable!!

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

Not Shakespeare but very sweet and any guy who would take the time to do that for his lady is a keeper!

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

how awesome are you!!! im sure ninna will enjoy the poem

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

I'm sure it will warm her heart. You seem like a nice guy.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

Very nice if you are trying to make her smile or laugh.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

Lucky Ninna!

It's cute.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

as long as its from the heart. %26lt;3

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

Beautiful, da-ling, just beautiful! ;)

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

yeah its sweet, now please answer mine!!!!!!!! PLEASE!

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I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

awww..... i want to be Ninna...... darn it.......lol

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

I love it! Just like a poem should be, meanigful, and funny! I'm sick of all the poems written by depressed people!

Aweseme poem, man.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

Ah its cute but you have a long way to go. This poem sounds like an eight year old is writing it.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

poem is kinda plain,

not much ethusiasm.

make it jump out at her.

get some synomyms for some words,

but them better for example:

instead of saying

The mountains are beautiful

and block the sun

(plain and boring)

say

The majestic mountains that block the light

From reaching forward to stand and fight

idk

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

well...it's not really great, sorry! It just doesn't flow at all and some of the rhymes are slant rhymes, which usually aren't very impressive, but I'm sure your girlfriend will love it, because it's from your heart!

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

awesome

just one little tip change anyways to anyway

totally your choice

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

rotflmao!

how about this...

Roses are red,

Violets are blue,

Your really hot,

I want to kiss you!

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

haha..thats like funny n cute..i digit

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

Men, you rock!

It sounds honest and I'm sure Ninna is gonna love it! Keep a copy of it close to you so you never let that flaming love to vanish over the years. Sounds like you guys are very much in love. Enjoy your enchanting days :) (and never let them go away).

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

If this is meant to be romantic.... well some of it doesn't pass.

The things I think that don't really work for this is- 'you seem clean and neat'. Why would you have that kind of thing in a romantic poem???

And the sexy socks.... well even though it is an inside joke it doesn't work for a romantic poem either. Or 'I got to tell you that you rock' doesn't really flow. Try 'Ninna I think that you really rock'.

Otherwise this is a really good poem.

Hope this helps!

=D

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

That is so kind and sweet! To me if I got that I would cry and would love it! That poem is very thoughtful, I think she would love it.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

It's so cute,but the whole your so beautiful as i want you to hear...should be is or you could change it to ...I want you to know that you are so beautiful

Not every line has to ryhme thats your default on the poem.

I decided to write a poem for a special someone? What do you think of it?

Its really sweet but it sounds relationship between you and ninna is just for the time being while you are together in the same place where you are both got jobs and that there is no assurances for further and more serious relationship.